Tuesday, August 25, 2009

Part 42 ;**

babe 09 ;* u might like what's in here ;**
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DALAL:

7amad lifted me off the ground

I tightened my grip around his neck
“7amad!! a little heads up would’ve been nice”
“oh sorry”

With every step he took my grip tightened
“not much faith in me” I turned my face towards his… I could feel his breathing against my cheek…was I too close to him?

I was blindfolded so I wasn’t able to read his eyes….was he joking? Or was he serious
“you can’t blame me… I’m blindfolded”

Amazingly while blindfolded I concentrated on other things…his scent was stronger and his heart beat fastened….

I put my hand on his face locating his ear to whisper to him…
“shga3d itsaween?”
“I’m looking for your ear have you seen it??” he smiled I felt it… I was able to find his ear quickly and I leaned in to whisper
“where are we now”
“Dalool”
“what? Please? I’m not asking about where we’re going!!”
“low shino ma agoolich”
“you have to tell me”
“explain why?”
“I’m your best friend and you have to tell me everything”
“lilasaf it’s not working with me”
“FINE!...ooow! I’m your best friend and I’m asking you for a favor…you wouldn’t turn down a friend…would you?”
“in this case and only this case I’m going to have to turn you down”
“*gasp!* you’re a horrible best friend” I teased
“am I?” I felt him being serious
“7amad are you asking me seriously?” I asked concerned
“…..”
“I can’t see your eyes so you have to tell me”
"my eyes?" SHIT!!! DID I SAY THAT???
“HAA?”
“what about my eyes?”
“what?”
“Dalal!”
“WHAT??!!” LET IT GO! LET IT GO! LET IT GO! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE LET IT GO!!!!

“shfeehom e3yooni?….”
“who said anything about your eyes?”
“you did”
“I did?” please pleaaaase pleaaaaaaaaaaaase let it go
Dalal!”
7amad your losing me”
“I’M THE ONE CONFUSED NOT YOU!” he said it angrily

SHDA3WA HE GETS MAD!!! IT’S SO UNLIKE HIM….HE’S THE PERSON YOU RUN TO AND HE’S USUALLY SO PATIENT

“why are you upset?” I asked still in my blindfold.

IF HE WAS A GIRL I MIGHT LET IT SLIDE AND SAY THAT HE WAS PMSING BUT HE IS A GUY!!! AND I DIDN’T SAY ANYTHING THAT WOULD UPSET HIM!!!

“mafeeny shay….makan 8a9dy a3a9eb” I heard the concern and regret in his voice… I BET IT HAS SOMETHING TO DO WITH THAT SALMA!!!

“you want to talk about it?”
“about what?”
“Whatever it is that’s bothering you?”
“Tomorrow…today’s your day” I nodded

I felt him stepping in to something and tightened my grip on him…it was moving!!! Swaying left and right…
“7amad” I whispered scared of what it was…
“lat 5afeen…Fajoor denay” he placed me down on a stool or a seat maybe a bench?....why is it swaying???

“I CAN’T I HAVE TO TAKE IT OFF!!!” I yelled as I reached for my blindfold
“NO!!!” they yelled and someone grabbed my wrists preventing me from taking it off.

It was definitely 7amad or 5aled…Fajoor placed her hand on my thigh
“Dalool trust us!!! You won’t regret it…”
“..ok”
“ahedich??” 7amad asked…he was holding me!!! My answer would be NO!!!
“yeah” I answered…

“mishayna?” 5aled asked
“ee yala”

Suddenly I heard a roaring sound….like an engine of some sort….WHERE THE HELL AM I ?
Minutes later…

I leaned near Fajoor
can I please take it off now??”
“Dalool we’re almost there!! Ne6raay!!!”
“fine” I pouted

After a few minutes…

A Pair of hands was touching the back of my head… I quickly placed my hands on his wrists… “eheh I’m taking the blindfold off”
“oh!”
He removed the blind fold and he was the first thing my eyes saw…he’s beautiful warm brown eyes…

OMG!!!!

He was really close to me and I didn’t realize yet where I was or what I was on but the movement of whatever I was on pushed him towards me…

His lips almost touched mine!!!!! OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG! OH MY GOD!!!!!

His luscious lips were almost on top of mine!! He didn’t move!!!

He stayed close to me and I was paralyzed!!! WHAT SHOULD I DO??

The movement of the thing I was on pushed him away and Fajoor held me from falling….

I was finally able to breathe!!! I looked around and….

Tears were starting to form….

I was speechless and I felt them all looking at me…

I looked at the most beautiful place on earth!! My favorite place in this world!...







THE SEA!!! I was surrounded by water and the shore was miles away!!!
MY HAPPY PLACE!!!

I stood up and turned in my place looking and memorizing everything…

I turned and I saw them and they had smiles on their faces and I hugged each and every one of them and I kept thanking them….

When I went over to hug 7amad…I was a bit reluctant but I pushed the thought away…



I’M HUGGING HIM AS A FRIEND JUST LIKE I DID WITH 5ALED!!



I opened my arms for him and I thanked him…

He held me for a while…our hug lasted longer than the hugs I gave the others.

He face was in my hair and my legs were dangling in the air…

He placed me down and turned his face before I was able to see him.

Fajoor, Dayoom and I started talking and chatting…


“Dalool you want to drive?”
“you serious??” I asked with a huge smile…

“7A’6ECH!!!...he never lets me drive!!!”
“me neither!!!” 7amad shot him a look
“ok fine I guess I deserved it..” we all looked at 5aled confused and 7amad was smiling
“he recked it the first week I bought it..” I laughed at the look in 5aled’s face…
“yeah…but he’s going to let me use it.. I can tell”
“walla iny kint ba5aleek bas 3nad 3alaik many im5aleek”
“7amoood…yalla 3ad” 7amad laughed.

He came towards me and helped walk over to the seat.

I sat and he bent down next to me with an arm on the back of my seat and he showed me the basics….

I AM GOING TO DRIVE A BOAT!!!!

I felt his breathing on cheek and shivers crawled in every direction.

I DROVE 7AMAD’S BOAT!!

I went any direction my heart desired….it was me, the boat and the sea…WE MAKE A GREAT COUPLE! Me and the sea are meant to be!


After a while 5aled drove and I sat next to 7amad…

I held the bench I was on with 7amad and Dayoom tightly..

5aled was litrally flying!! He’s driving was insane no wonder he recked the boat!!

“5ayfa?” 7amad whispered in my ear

“what?!!! No!!! *blushing* mu 5ayfa kilish”

3alayna??”

I looked into his eyes and I felt exposed… I felt like he was able to read every thought in my mind…

TOO MUCH!!! I CAN’T TAKE IT!!! LOOK AWAY!!!!
YOU IDIOT LOOK AWAY AND BREATHE!!!

I was glued to his gorgeous face not breathing…mesmerized…
SHIT LOOK AWAY!!!!

I looked down at my thighs…OH YA LIKE THAT WAS SMOOTH!!!! IDIOT!!! WHAT’S HE GOING TO THINK NOW???

9 comments:

  1. WAAAAAAAAY I love u thx for the ded. I love u ! Oo I loved the post ;******

    BABE 09;*

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  2. 3ndii question!
    im the only one ily tabiii dalal oo mCdonald guy ma3a ba3ath right ? so im going to stop what im doing cause minoo ana to a5areb the story i think ina u planed the story without mCdonald guy! anyways even if u wanted dalal with the farash mal mCdonald i wouldnt say no becaues its from u oo i love the way u write so from now and on ra7 anche3em good ok!
    loved the story !
    oo love u hun!

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  3. identity: waaaay i love you!!! ;**

    BTW ur not and i repeat are not ruining the story... so yawalich itha inche3mtay!

    and i actually planned the story to include mcdonalds guy...so he pretty much is in this story as my lead characters ;* or he will be soon..

    i love hearing what you think!

    you made my day by this comment bas i'm not as easy as you think and you might be the only one who wants them together but you never know.

    o0 i love how open minded you are but i promise i won't let dalal let 2 of the hottest guys for a farash mal mcdonalds ;***

    love you ;***

    (can't wait to hear what you think about my next post xoxo)

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  4. 7abibty!
    u know that i love u right oo do u know ina u are one of my fav bloggers!!?
    (even if i dont get what i want u still will be one of my fav bloggers;)
    i love u and ur story!
    oo inshallah 3amty mara7 anche3m!
    oo inshalah u will moo bess in ur next post bess in every post u will ever post!;)

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  5. it was me, the boat and the sea…WE MAKE A GREAT COUPLE! Me and the sea are meant to be!

    It rhymes.. They were totally meant to be:P!
    I LOOOOOOVE HAAL POSST!!
    I LOVE 7AMAD! Umbaaih Eyanen chulb:(! I know he loves her as much as I love him so why doesnt he just tell her:(?

    Waiting for the next Amazing Post AKEED!;*
    xx.

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  6. Weeehh Tawnii Ala7eth Its my First time commentingg:O!
    Then I Have To Tell You I .L O V E. Your Storyy!!!!
    I always have.. bs I guess I was too lazy to comment before:$!
    Keep On Goingg You Have Such An Amazing Talentt<33! Ebdaaa33 Insaany As I like to call it:P!

    Ok Ma3endy Salfa So I'll Just Shut Up.. Thank You !!!;D

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  7. I LOVE <3 WOYY 7AMAD;$
    I KEEP IMAGINING HIM WITH ME <3

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  8. identity: thanks it's means alot when i hear u say that. :*****

    The Despirate Dreamer: thanks ;*

    i'm smiling insanely right now ;P


    ;*: you and me both ;P

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