Friday, February 12, 2010

Blind Love 20

LONG POST ;** enjoy guys and inshala u have a great weekend ;**
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3bdalaa held Lulu close to him fearing she might fall.

“3bdalaa I’m fine *giggling*”
“I know you are…bas..*silence*”
“bas??”
“the ground isn’t leveled”
“oh?”
“yeah so you don’t want to fall now do you?”
“*shaking her head* no”
“*chuckles*I thought so”
she giggled

That 3bdallaa certainly turned her life around.

“ready for the ride of your life?”
“em no? 3boody please shway shway”
“what?”
“y3nee don’t go too fast and don’t do any scary moves or whatever”
“no what did you call me?”
“huh? 3bdalaa?”
what is he getting at? She thought
“no you said 3boody”
“no I didn’t” the hell if I did!! She thought
“yeah you did”
“no I didn’t I said 3boody! *gasp! Hand over mouth* I’m sorry! *flushed* it slipped! I didn’t”
“I like it *removing her hand from her mouth*”
“I…*blushing and shaking her head*”
“I like it *whispering her ear inhaling her mind blowing scent*”
“Joury!” they turned to see an angry Hind
“what?!! Look you don’t understand!! It’s not that I’m afraid of that!! *pointing at the jet skies* it’s that what scares me!! *pointing at the sea*”
“why?”
“because!!... I have my reasons!”
“which are?”
“ugh!! I just…it’s..I can’t explain it!”
“well then if you can’t then you’re riding *Joury giving her a shocked look*you didn’t give me a good enough reason”
“a5aaaaaaaaaaf!! It’s everything!! It’s that it’s so big and I’m so small…it has things in it!! And I don’t want to be there with them! What if I drawn? I can’t swim!! What then?!!!”
“then there is 9ali7!! *pointing at 9ali7!* he’ll take good care of you and he knows C.P.R plus if you happen to fall he’ll pull you out before you know it!”
“but”
“Joury ana weyach laish 5ayfa? Ba3dain thakrenee a3lmich shlon tisb7een”
“*sigh* I trust you *whispering and digging her face in his chest wrapping her arms around him*”

They all saw the look in 9ali7’s face…the way he was dumbfounded when she hugged him and the way he eased up and embraced her hug.

They saw what they didn’t before…9ali7? Could it be?…could 9ali7 have a thing for Joury??

“but I swear!!”
“Joury! Intay weyay ana!! Akeed ba5af 3alaich mara7 i9eer shay baba”

They all went towards the jet skies…

They all had to wear their life jackets according to 9ali7.

“ooooo!!*jumping slightly up and down* Hind!! Let’s take the pretty pink one!!”
“hehehe habla walaa habla”
“chub!”

“Lulu ako azrag oo ako a5thar shtabeen?”
“it doesn’t matter 3ady”
“laa muhim shino mishtahya??”
“emm azrag?”
“*chuckle* yallaa”

“3ayal ana oo intay a5thar”
“yeah :S”
“shfeeech lal7een 5ayfa?”
“*looking up at him and shrugging her shoulders*”

He side hugged her as they walked towards their jet ski.

Hind and Jinan took off without a second delay.

“deeerbalkom!!”
“inshaalaaaa!!”

“yalaa lulu..*picking her up*”
“wahhh!! 3bdalaa heads up just a reminder I can’t see!”
“asfeen yal ‘3alyaa ;P”
“why’d you pick me up? *still in his arms*”
“the jet is on the water mabeech tistabridain”

Awwwww she thought…ugh!! I can’t!! I won’t!! no way will I fall for him!!
I’ll only get my heart broken…what does he want with a blind girl when he can have any girl he wants.

“lulu 7abeebty shfeech?”

There he goes again!! Melting my heart all over again She thought.

“Hmm? Nothing just excited *fake smile*”

3bdalla new she wasn’t telling him the truth and he could see right through that fake smile…there was a part of him that wanted her to open up with him but he didn’t want to push her so…he pretended to be clueless and just accept that she was fine.

He carefully placed her on the jet…

“rif3ay reeylich wadee il9ob ithanee”
“emm ok..ahh…waay this is so hard”

He climbed behind her holding her…he placed his right hand on the handle of the jet and his left on her waist.

“mara7 i6ee7een ana maskich”

She placed her hand on his shoulder as she placed her leg on the other side.
She sat down as 3bdalla scotched closer to her.

“ready? *she could hear the engine*”
“*deep breath* yeah” he chuckled as he drove off.

9ali7 and Joury reached the edge of the beach where he stopped her she got so excited

“we’re not? *huge smile*”
“no we are but I don’t want you to get wet…get over here*pulling her from the edge of her shirt*”

Her smile faded and took an enormous deep breath and walked towards 9ali7.

At the far end of the beach he stood starring at both 9ali7 and Joury…His Joury. He felt a burning sensation running through his body as he watch these so called “cousins” together. He could tell now that 9ali7 was a threat…but he’s not going down without a fight…Saif’s back.

9ali7 was facing Joury as he bent and picked her up…both her arms were around his neck and his arms just beneath her butt area…they were face to face as he walked towards the jet.

Joury felt an awkward shiver take over her…running everywhere and her heartbeats felt like a drum roll.

She concentrated on him…his face…taking all his features in…everything about him drew her in…

Her head was slightly above his…she quickly looked away before he noticed…

What the hell is happening to me?!! She wondered

“laykoon lal7een 5ayfa jay? Careful with that answer cause if it’s a yes I’m throwing you overboard” she tightened her grip and quickly replied
“la2 la2! I’m not!!”
“akeeed?” he loosened his grip
“ahh!! Yes akeed mu 5ayfa!!”
“jay *serious tone* don’t ever lie to me…” she kept starring at him…he knew she was scared as hell and he was dead serious with her.

She nodded lost in his eyes “…or I might just throw you” she smiled feeling so safe…

She’s never felt this safe before…right now right here in his arms.

He placed her on the jet ski as he got on it.
“tabeen tig3deen jidamee? Wala waray?”
“emm…warak!! I don’t want to see anything”
“*laughing* illy tabeen yalaa”
she got behind him as he drove of..

She held on to him like there was no tomorrow.

I’ve never done this!!”
“I know…I wanted to be your first”
“hahaha well you’ll be that and my last!!”

He smiled…why can’t I just have her? he thought.

10 mints later

“Joury?!! You ok?!!”
“yeah!! *holding him just as tight as she was, not easing up…her head glued to his back*”
“tabeen tardifeenee?”
“no!! I’m happy here!!”
“*chuckled* illy iray7ich”

“Lulu?!!”
“halaa?!*turning towards him as her cheek gracefully brushed against his lips*”

He moved slightly away as a reflex…which he regretted the moment he moved away…and she did the same.

“give me your hands”
“why??”
“bas abeehum!!”
“ha?! 3bdala what do you want with them?”
“bakilhom shabee feehum? *joking*”
“*giggling* 3bdalaa!! Mabee a7arik eedy”
“trust me*whispering in her ear”

She slowly loosened her grip from the jet skies seat and waited for him to take the lead.

He placed her hands on the handle.

“what are you doing? *scared*”
“nothing just taking a break from driving”
“i..3bdalaa I can’t…”
“you can and I’m right here with you…lulu there’s nothing you can’t do trust me…”
“*tear*don’t leave me”
she meant in both ways…1. Not to leave her ever 2. To not leave her hanging while she was driving and to direct her through it.

3bdalaa didn’t really grasp what she meant…he took the obvious which was to help her with the Jet Ski.

“off!! Shino hatha *wiping her tear* Lulu 7abeebty intay… mabee ashoof dam3a tanzil min 3yoonich mara thanya…ana weyach il7een oo bagoolich shino jidamich just like the buggies”
“you promise?”
“I promise”
“yeah? *smile* so if I accidently did something wrong you would take the blame?”
“for you? anything” she smiled widely .

“hanooooooood!! Ya 7maraa!! Yal kalbaaaa!! Slow down!! Bamoooooooooooot!! Ambai ambai wallaa a7ss ba6ee7!!”
“chub zain this is pay back for the buggies!!”
“ma sawaitlich shay!! Ana awareech!”
“yes you did…ohoo 5ala9 5ala9 I’m slowing down!”
“it’s now my turn to drive :D”
“ugh! Fine!”
“oooh!! Hanooood!!”
“what? What?”
“someone’s watching you!!”
“ha?!! Mino hal kalb?”
“*laughing* what makes you think it’s a guy??”
“huh?? 3ayal mino hal kalba!?”
“I spy with my little eye something beginning with L and on the shore with a kid…tall…good looking…”

Hind’s head spun around to see if she could locate him…him!! LOVER BOY.

“ugh!! You think he still remembers this morning??”
“Hanood it was like an hour ago…akeed he remembers!!”
“you could’ve lied!!”
“hahaha now where’s the fun in that?”
“hahahah chub!”

They laughed hyseterically.

“9ali7?? Are we done now??”
“tawna Jay agool ta3alay gi3day jidamee”
“no no!! I Don’t want to move!!”
“ta3alay!”
“please 9ali7 mabee at7arak!! Ba6ee7!!”
“mintay 6ay7aa! Yalaa”
she was shaking furiously as she stood up loosening her grip on him…he placed his hands on her waste.

“la7tha!! Wait!!”
“ma sawait shay Joury!”
“inzain wait don’t rush me!!”
“*chuckle* wouldn’t dream of that”
“*gasping* I’m going to fall!!!”

He tightened his grip on her…
“yalaa maskich”

She carefull shifted herself to sit in front of him not until she lost her balance.

“***gaaaaaaasssppp!!***”

9ali7 quickly got a good hold on her pulling her as fast as he could back on her feet…away from the water.

“*panting!!** oh my god!! Uhhh!” she sat herself in front of him trying to catch her breath.
“ma9ar feech shay *hugging her from behind as she rested the back of her head on his chest looking up at the bright sky trying to calm herself*”
“I hate this”
“hey nothing happened jay”
“I almost died!!”
“yalaa 3ad! *laughing*”
“it’s not funny!”
“I’m sorry *puppy eyes*”
“good!”
“afaaaa”
“can we go back please?”
“no”
“please!! I don’t want to be here *sad eyes*”
“you’re not having fun are you?”
“I’m just scared…I want to have fun…I just…I’m sorry”
“hay…you trust me?”
“yeah”
“to what extent do you trust me?”
“with my life”
“then trust me nothing is going to happen to you as long as I’m here…now cheer up and drive”
“*sigh and she smiled* okay!”
“eee chithy!”
she giggled
“So this is the only thing you came up with”
“Not even close…a few more surprises”
“They involve the sea don’t they?”
he smirked as he indicated that she was right on track.
“is this a way to get back at me?”
“for what?”
“I don’t know!”
“shlon chithy itfakreen feeny?”
“hmm? Ahh I…oh!! Look!! Baroo7 3indhoom!”
“ee ee ‘3ayray ilmawthoo3” she giggled.

After an hour they all headed back to shore…3bdalaa took control and drove back…Joury was having a blast and was way relaxed…hind and Jinan well they…they kept bickering about stupid things and laughing at the most insignificant things known to mankind.

“okay!! It’s our turn now!!”
“not yet ana layl7een ma5ala9t”
“what?!”
“we’re parasailing”
“what?!!! Are you insane??”
“wanaaaaaaaaaaaaaaasaaaaaaaaaaa!!!”
“tara 9a3ib kan ilmowthoo3 so kilkoom ibtirkiboon..sima3tay Joury?”
“yeah yeah! Bas barkab weyak!!”
“*chuckle* 7athreen ;P”
he was happy she wanted him…for this at least.

They all piled up in the speed boat and the instructor was blabbering on about safety regulations and what not…

“mino awal?”
ana!!” they all spun to face her…LULU!! She’s back!!
“hello??” she asked from the sudden silence

They all laughed

“ilsha5a awal…”
“mino tabeen weyach?”
“it’s fine”
“ana!!”

3bdalaa stayed quiet..he wanted to be with her but..hey next time probably.

“yalaa Janoon please lat5ar3eeni”
“emm…ok *hugging her*”
“itfakreen ba3ad!”
“I was going to play the shark role bas fine whatever”
“what shark role?”
“you know…when we’re up they’re I’ll just say OMG A SHARK!!!”
“laaaaaaa2! Ya 7maraa!! Broo7ee mashoof tabeeen abool 3ala roo7y?!!”

She quickly placed her hands on her lips…WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH ME AND MY MOUTH TODAY?!! She thought

She could hear them all burst into laughter

“ana weyach?”
“eeee!! Ee ana abee 3bdalaa"
“afaaaaaaaa!!!fine…but you’re going to miss me”
“I bet she is *sarcastic*”
“shtabeeen? *pouting!*”
“abeech intay ;P”
“awww *hug*”
“get a room!” she whispered
“waaaaaaaaaaaai3!! Joury intay oo tafkeerich!”
“shgalat?”
“nothing wai3”

They all went up…3bdalaa described the view until she was satisfied…

“I love it when you do that”
“do what?”
“when you describe it all…I feel like…I don’t know how to explain it but *sigh* I hope you got that *giggling*”
“*laughing* I did..”

They were lowering them down.

“what’s happening?!”
“3adee 3adee they’re just taking us down”
“oh..ok *smile* thanks”
“walaw”

Up next were the crazy chicks…yup Jinan and hind.

They were bickering about shoes and clothes…

“oh!!! I’m traveling this week to see the parents..yup just meee and the parents…meeeeee all aloooone with my parents…all over Europe…shopping…alone…just me….in europe…no one else”
“I GOT IT!! You’re going to Europe alone”
“*sigh*yeah…ALONE!!”
“ok!!”
“ya 7maraaa!! Come with me!!”
“ha! Try saying that to MY parents”
“yalaaa Hanood ma3indy a7ad weyay!!...”
“I’ll see what I can do but it’s not a yes so don’t get excited!”
“AHHHHHHHHHHH!!! You’re coming with me!!*clapping*”
“it’s like talking to a wall…pointless”
“chub you love me”
“true…*laughing*”

When it was Joury and 9ali7’s turn they were silent up there…nothing much….they both felt an awkward air come between them.

“Shrayich?”
“hmm? Oh it’s nice”
“nice?”
“yeah?”
“just nice?”
“it’s great? *fake smile*”
“shfeech?”
“what makes you think there’s something wrong?”
“cause there is”
“no there isn’t” she lied…she was thinking about him…no not 9ali7 but Saif.
“Joury!”
“what?!!”
“ana sakit min i9ob7 oo adree feech shay…shfeech?”
“nothing I was just a bit scared!!”
“bull shit”
“what?!!”
“you heard me”
“9ali7! Don’t ruin this!”
“I’m not…you are…fahmeeni shilyim’6aygich?”
“nothing!! GOD! Will you let it go! Kilish mu wagta il7een!”
“no it’s perfect…there’s no where you can go…they can’t hear us…and the view is a plus”
“are you serious?..NOTHING IS BOTHERING ME BUT YOU!!”
“good to know…shimsaweelich?”
“you ruined everything!!”
“laykoon yayba 6areee thak ilmawthoo3? *angry eyes*”
“I want to go down *waving her hands*” he got a good grip on them
“aaaaaaaw! You’re hurting me”
“right back at you”
“what happened?”
“what? *angry look*”
“we were fine a minute ago!!”
“Joury *sigh* ma7ib ashoof a7ad mit’6ayg…bithat intay”
“I’M NOT!”
“THE HELL YOU AREN’T!”

She remained quiet…how does he know me so well?!

“you saw him?” she froze…her eyes widened and her chest was set on fire…lack of oxygen surrounded her as she tried to act normal.

“who? *playing dumb*”
“Sssaif” he spat
“I…he…no?”
“Joury I just asked you not to lie to me…you did didn’t you?”
“I..I ran into him…I didn’t plan it! And I didn’t know he was here”
“did you talk to him?”
“I wanna go down..i wanna go down now”
she barely answered
“I take that as a yes…*looking away and thinking out loud* why do you keep hurting me?”
“THIS HAS NOTHING TO DO WITH YOU!!!”

He quickly placed his hand on her cheek and jaw holding her firmly.

“it has everything to do with me!!”

She was lost in his eyes…what is going on?!!

42 comments:

  1. identityyyy :'(!
    I wanted to be first :'(!
    brb bagraaaaaaaa :'(

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  2. Waaayyyyyyyyyyy!! AMAZING post!! wayy zoQaaaaaaaa;;**

    Me like ^^ ,, coz I was involved in your story ^^
    "3bdalla new she wasn’t telling him the truth and he could see right through that fake smile"

    You said THE TRUTH :P! lool ambaih lazgaa :P! LOOL! I enjoyed iiitttt;;;***,,Post soon please;;*

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  3. ambaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay w25eeran 5al ygoolaha :P awwwwww lulu and 3boody are sooooo cuteeee :P

    love the post and lovee you wala plz plz pooost soooooooooooooooooon
    um flfola

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  4. OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO:P
    I LOVE IT I LOOOVE IT I LOVE THE SUSPENSE!!;**

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  5. 3AJEEEEEEEEEEEB 3AJEEEEEEEEEEE 3AJEEEEEEEEEEEEEB!!
    WAAYY WAAAYYYY 3ABDULLAH W LULU W 9ALI7 W JOURY! bas gotta admitt hend and jinan are my favs :p hehe..MASHALLAH I LUVED EVERY SINGLE LINE IN IT! AMAAAAAAZIINGGG!

    luv u :**

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  6. 3bdla and 9alii7 are aborable !!!=p =**
    Thankkk you
    -N~

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  7. OMG!!!!!!!!HE'S GOING TO TELL HER!!!
    PLEASE!!

    LOVE THIS POST!!
    3ABOODY BREATHTAKING<3
    I DIDN'T LIKE 9ALI7 MUCH ON THIS POST:(

    jinan n hind ye'67kooooooon

    love it!!

    i still cant believe ur back che shock!

    ~~heaven

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  8. this post was beyond amaaziiingg!!
    wallaa im in love with this storyy;)
    post sooonn;**

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  9. UMMMBAAAAAAAY
    Whats Going to happen next???:O
    Please Post soon (tonight if you can)

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  10. walla i just loved this post oo i can't wait for the next:P

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  11. AAAAAAAAAAAAH YAAA GALLBII!! AHH YA 3BAID OO YA 9WAIILI7 ;p WAYED 3AYSHA ILDOOR 9A7??;p

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  12. ALLAAAHH!!:* a7iib 3abdullaahh ou 9allii777:( 3ajeebeenn!! wallaa and i love your story !!
    amazing as alwayss;** !!

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  13. why do you keep hurting us?!!!
    why do you have to be so good?!
    why does your story have to be AMAZING!
    why do you love giving us cliffhangers?!;(
    ;p i think i let it all out;p
    9ALII7:*<<< why is he so great! *sigh*
    now i am done(:
    possst sooon plss;*

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  14. ID!!!: ur on a role missy ;P hahahaa yup first again :D

    The Truth;*: hehehe next time inshalaa :D LOOOOOOOOOOL yes you were in my story!! :O!! hahahha inshaalaaa i'll post as soon as i can...hehehe loved ur comment :D

    um flfola;*: yes 7addaa finaly!! ;P hahaha we'll see what happens with them in the next post :p it loves u back :D I love u too sweetie ;** inshala ASAP :D

    Glo*;*: hehehe :D :D i'm so happy to hear that!! :D inshaalaa doom and it loves ya right back babe ;P

    glittery-butterfliez;*: hehehahahha :D :D inshalaaa doooooom :D yeah i love jinan and hind too hahaha...thanks ur comment plastered a smile on my face :D :D I love u too hun ;**

    Charmbracelet;*: hehehe yes they are if only they were real...and i'm the writer ;P hahaha...ur so so welcome babe ;*

    ~~heaven;*: Looool u'll find out in the next post :D ooo poor 9ali7 it's his lost he'll win u back in the next post i hope ;P hahaha....I love those girls too hahahaa...yeah i still didn't grasp that yet but hey i'm BAAAAAACK :D :D :D

    Anon;*: Thanks sweetie :D:D I'm SO SO happy to hear that :D :D it's means alot :D and inshala ASAP ;**

    Anon;*: LOOL u'll find out in the next post but i can't tonight i'm busy i'll try tomorrow night inshala ;*

    Rawan;*: hehehe I'm thrilled to hear it :D I'll post as soon as i can :D don't want to make you wait :D

    M76;**: LOOOOOOOOL 3eeshay ildoor mama hahhaha :D :D

    ALWAYS.BE:*:Loool they LOVE u right back ;P hahaha ;**** I'm so glad to hear that!! :D :D thanks babe love ya ;**

    bluelilies;**: LOOOOOOOOOOOOOL I don't know babe :s hahahahaa walaa these are some good questions ;P hahaha inshalaaaaaaaaa ASAP i'll post ;**

    I LOVE U GUYS!!

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  15. LULU AND 3ABDALLAH ALL THE WAAAAY!! :p

    huge fan of ur story! keepem comin :p

    -Lama

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  16. THE POSTS ARE JUST GETTING BETTER AND BETTER;*******
    HAM ABDULLLAAAH<3

    pls la6awleen 3alaina:***

    S

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  17. at laaaast!! lazm 9ali7 egoolaha ina he loves her :'(
    cant wait for the next post!
    thanx!
    A

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  18. I MISSED THIS STORY SOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH AND I MISS YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU....3ABDULLAAAAAAAAAAA *SIGHHHHHHHHHHHH*

    JOURRRRRRRRRRRRRRY IF ULL KEEP HURTING 9AYOOFI TARA ILL STEAL HIM AWAY........MUHAHAHAH

    i love you...cant wait for ur next post

    yalla joury forget saif already:P

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  19. Lama;**: I'm on their team too ;P hahaha I'm so flattered!!! inshalaa i'll post as soon as i can babe :P

    S;**: Thanks hun i'm so happy u feel that way :D :D inshalaa i'll post ASAP ;**

    A;**: hahaha we'll see what happens in the upcoming post inshala ;** ur more than welcome babe ;**

    Nawarii;**!!!!: I missssed u more ;**!!wainich 3an my blog?? ;P oh oh 9AYOOF?!! mino hatha ba3ad loooool i know it's 9ali7 hahaha.. i love u more babe and inshala i'll post when i can ;**

    love u all ;**

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  20. I realllllly realllllly hope innnaaa lulu get to be with 3abdallaaa, and then at the end she gets her sight back!!!!! waaay! witshoooofaaaa for the first timmmeee! way that's so romantic!!!!!!!

    ok I babbled alot lol;p

    eeeh oo one more thing, magdar an6ir lamma 9ali7 tells joury how he truly feels about her!! a7is bitshoofa in an another way, since she's always felt like he's a brother and all....

    and hind and her new love interest? chinna too early to call it love, basss SO CUTE!!!!!

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  21. ayyy ayyy galbiiiiiiiii

    my heart is achingggggg mn hal 9ale77
    JOURY ESTEE3AAB !! Y3NE DUUUH THE GUY IS INLOVE WITH U ITS NOR HARD TO FIGURE OUT !!!!

    O SAIF go get a life :)

    hend and jinan ANA MN ZMAAAAN A7EBKM ;***

    lulu daloo3a bs a7ebha ;p

    9ale7 .. NO COMMENT ;****

    9ale7 .. EYANNEN

    9ale7;. ( btw i can go on and on bs 5aleenyqa skit a7sanly ;p )

    lover dude !! HAHA IS SO FUNNY !!!! THE INCIDENT THAT HAPPENED WITH THE KID WAS SOOO FUNNYYYY!!:P



    post sooon hun ;***

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  22. shasawii ya3nii? ako this voice that tellls me "ID, LI posted tara" i open ur blog and BINGO itkooniin u just posted 3ad inshalla that voice dayamn it gives me a heads up:D

    anyways about the post I LOVED IT:D i seriously did well that's not something new since i LOVE all ur posts....ur an amazing writer babe u know that right about now right?!
    i loved the post
    i AM loving the story seriously i am....i can keep on saying im loving it all day cause seriously i do:D
    and one more thing
    I LOVE YOU:D

    p.s whens the next post? it3arfyn 3ashan the voice comes back to me oo akoun first:D hahahahaha

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  24. Your writing is phenomanal.
    Loved every bit of this post.
    Illy ba3doo :D


    I love 9ale7:* 9ij rayal!

    x Pistol

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  25. Zaina;**:LOOOOOOOL u'll just have to wait and see ;P...she might end up with him who knows ;P hmm...I'm not sure about her sight though ;P hahaha u'll find out what happens with 9ali7 and joury and hind and her new "love" interest in the next post inshala ;**

    Unchained Melody;**: LOOOOOOL :D :D smila 3ala galbich ;** try telling her that hahaha ;P looool they love u back babe ;*

    looooool i loved that part the most hahaha...

    inshala ASAP;**

    ID!!!!;***: LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL :D :D inshalaaaa that voice is always by ur side hahahaha...u have no idea what that means!!! i'm so glad that ur loving it :D :D

    oh and don't worry inshala the voice comes to u soon ;p

    I LOVE U MORE ;**

    Pistol;**:Thank you so much babe! it means alot to me ;**looooooool inshala ASAP hahaha I love him too hahaha...afterall i made him up ;P heheheh

    LOVE U GUYS SO MUCH!! ;*****

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  26. I'm in love with 9ale7!!! zooooqa!

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  27. I AM IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY! YOU'RE SO TALENTED MASHALLAH!
    I dont like 9ale7 I want Joury to be with Saif! and omg! lulu and 3bdullaaa!! ahhh they're soo cuteee together! and Jinan and Hind are so funny but you should like make them more close to lulu! I cant wait for the next post :') < tears of joy! hahaahahh

    takkeee caaree

    -R ;)

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  28. 3AAAAAAAAAABBBBBBBBBDDDDDAAAAALLLLLLLLLAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA A33333333SSSSSSHHHHHHGGKKKKKKKKKK !!!! WEEEEEEEENKKK 3ANYYYY WEEEEEEEENKKK ;P ??!!

    WAAAAAAAYY 7ADDAAA ZOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOQAA !! EYANNIIINNN EHAABLLLL

    3ad ween enlagy wa7ed zay 3abdalla ?? ;(


    loving it ! and i love you !

    i really cant wait till the next post !

    mwaaaaaaaaaah ;*

    btw im the mishary commenter LOOOL .. u can call me L if u want ;*

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  29. liciousssss weinichhh?!
    we miss uuu:(
    i miss you;**
    ooo i miss the characterss
    oo habal jinan and hind;P
    post sooon huun;***

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  30. pooost sooon i misss yoooou :(

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  31. Hullabaloo;**: looooool he loves ya right back hehhe :D :D

    R;**: Thank u so much and i'm so glad ur loving it inshalaa doom :D hmmm in time u'll find out who ends up with who :D but hey ur like the second person who's rooting for Saif :D she might just end up with him ;P yeah i love the girls inshalaa u'll see how close they are to lulu in up-coming posts :D looooooool if it's tears of joy then i don't mind hahaha ;* u too babe

    L (mishary commenter!!!);**: LOOOOOOOOOOOOL unfortunately he doesn't exist :( all made up :( hahaha bil jana inshalaa ;P hahahaah i'm thrilled babe!! inshalaa doom and I LOVE U RIGHT BACK ;**

    Anon;**: 7abeebty walaa i'm sorry i haven't been inspired to write for a while and loya ma3a iljam3a :S but i'll try my best to post as soon as i can...I miss u more ;**** inshalaa u'll read about them soon ;*

    Anon;**: inshalaa ;** i miss u too babe ;** mako sad faces! :D :D ;** ASAP i'll be posting ;D

    LOVE U GUYS SO MUCH ;**

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  32. i've been a silent reader since ur first story .. i really love ur writings .. i'm in love in ur story. please post soon!!
    love u!!

    -Ragad

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  33. with ur story**
    -ragad

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  34. Loved the post <3

    Please post soon, lovely!

    Jay.

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  35. amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing!!!!
    LOVED IT and I think I'm falling for abdullah?
    yes yes yes But I still haven't forgotten about my one and only saif :(
    Inshalah ya3nie ykun muwjud b next post ya3nie;p inshalah bas, heheheheh :D
    Loving this and you more sweetheart
    xoxo

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  36. please post were waiting !!
    love you!!

    s;**

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  37. waaaaaaaaaaainiiiich :( min ziman u didnt pooooost were waiting 7bebty hope u post soon :P
    um flfola

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  38. waaaaaaaaaaaainiich we miss yoou

    um flfola

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  39. Ragad;**:hey sweetie :D i'm glad u commented :D and i'm so happy ur enjoying my stories inshalaa i'll post as soon as i can and i know it's been a while but inshalaa ASAP ;**

    Jay;**: hehehe it loves ya right back inshalaa ASAP

    tima Q;**:loooool well then 3bdala is a lucky guy hahaha eee ashwaa u didn't forget about him and inshalaa u'll read about him soon ;P love u too babe ;**

    S;**: inshala as soon as i get it all down i'll post ;** love u too hun ;*

    um flfola;**:hehehe i'm here babe bas i've been over busy to get to writing but i am now and inshala ASAP u'll get the post hun ;* hehehe walaa i miss u more ;**

    LOVE U GUYS ;**

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  40. Hiii i know this story and I know who u r;) don't delete this licious

    Me

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